A Lovely Girl
Assalamualaikum. All praise be to Allah, the lord of the universe who guides us back to the straight path. How are you guys? Around these eight months, I didn't post anything on this blog because I'm completely busy these days. I am not as productive as always in writing. Hopefully, twice a month I can post my story on this blog. My first story on this month is about one of my beloved friends.
I have a best classmate at Hamka University named Hikayatul Khairiyah. I usually call her Hika. I knew her since two years ago. She is a nice girl because she is a friendly, pretty, careful, smart and religious girl. She always takes a good care of many people, she is very lovable person. One thing that I am proud of her is she can be responsible with every decision she makes. Even sometimes she got bored and lazy with her activities. She can handle it for example, she often does the tasks from our teacher in last minutes, but she can do it well. Sometimes I call her "Ms. Perfect" because she often has a perfect fit although the time is impossible. She has a bad habit; she sometimes comes late in each event even to the lectures. Maybe it caused by her habit. We have a similar hobby. We love to watch movies. Especially the movies that can improve our new vocabularies in English. Knowing her good and bad side, I feel fortunate to know her. She's one of my best friends, and I hope we can maintain this good relation forever. Amen…
* Topic Sentence : I have a best classmate at Hamka University named Hikayatul Khairiyah.
* Topic : best classmate
* Controling Idea : named Hikayatul Khairiyah.
* Concluding Sentence : She's one of my best friends, and I hope we can maintain this good relation forever.
Ooh gosh..!!
I'm so embarrassing.. (#^_^#)
thank u so much dear...
hey there... why did u put those terrible picture of us..??
There are beautiful pictures of you, Ega and Hika.
I like it. ;)
interesting and detail description. Why dont' u analyze the topic sentence as well as the concluding sentence? The sentence u use is already great in the sense that u have tried to combine several types of sentences, and I appreciate that. But................,,,, mind ur grammar plz.Pay attention to the use of appropriate transition signal, preposition, and er, punctuation:-). Nice u enclose the picts too. Good job dear.
Hika : No trouble at all ;)
That’s another beatiful side of us (as nabil said) *narcissism :p
Nabil : Thanks a bundle dear
Ms. Refika : Yes ms. Grammar has always been my problem in writing. Previously I wasn't sure with my writing product. Just because the deadline is this morning, so I plan to edit my writing product. May I edit my writing please ms? :) anyway, thank you for correcting me.. *u said that d deadline is on Sunday 8 am, so I still have time to revise my writing right? :D
Not necessary dear. Let it be in thz way;-)